Creaking Silence

This was very good! I really liked it! It was so simple, yet carried a great, underlying message! There are only two lines that bugged me. Never caring an ounce, ...

Hello there! Before I begin, it's a rule here that we must review 2 things before we post anything. I see that you haven't reviewed anything, so I recommend that ...

Hey! This is really long, so I would recommend that you just split this up in chapters. Yes, create a totally new thread for each chapter. You will get more ...

The children playing in our village gave out sharp yelps, and my head was starting to hurt . Will we ever get accepted? I tried to shake off a little ...

Hello! I studied my surroundings [comma] yet there was nothing to study. It was weird[s],[/s] [dash] hard to explain. But one thing was for sure [colon] I was alone, not ...

Hey! I'm back at your request (and my interest). The eyes of my family bored into my back, and I hunched my shoulders defensively. Um, what? The eyes of my ...

Well, is it wrong that I don't understand what this is about? Poetry has never been my thing - always failed miserably with ever chance. This poem is so short, ...

I'm afraid that I don't agree with PenguinAttack. Those periods made this poem seem very childish. It's like when you don't let off of the period button. .................... It gets ...

Hey, KJ! I love the title! The main problem with this piece is that you are telling us. My English teacher gave me an example of telling versus showing. The ...

This was really good! I love the wordings that you used, and really anything else. It all worked out quite well. It gave me brilliant, vivid images, and all in ...

Hey! This is my first review, and I've looked over the one above me, so I'm pretty sure what I'm supposed to do. My father was a police-man. His Slavic ...